Silence Kills!! - Things go wrong

Part 2
Kate sat in the corner of the living room, sobbing uncontrollably. She took one teary look at the room and let out a wail!

After what seemed like hours to her, she got up, dropped her pistol on the table went to the bathroom, and washed her face, after taking a sip of water, she took out her phone with trembling hands, there was no tone.
She headed for the main door, picking up her pistol as she went. Removing her jacket from behind the door, with one hand on the doorknob, she took one last look at the room, sniffing, she went out, got into her car, and pulled out of the driveway.

After descending the mountain, she tried her phone again, there was a tone, she dialed a number,

*ring-ring*
"Hello, Cain here,"
"H-h-hel-lo" Kate stammered, taking a deep breath, she said, "Mike, Kate here."
"Kate!" replied the Special Agent, Michael Cain , sounding thoroughly relieved, "where did you disappear, you did'nt even inform anyone, and your phone was out of reach too!"
"I-i'm sorry Mike, but i'm on my way" replied Kate.
"Is something wrong Kate, you sound different" asked Michael Cain anxiously.
"Actually, there's something I have to tell you, i'll be at HQ in another 40 minutes" said Kate.








6 miles away
A man staggered out of his car, he was panting, sweating and was bruised badly. Everything had gone wrong, he still couldn't grasp how he'd failed this time, after all, he was the best, having never failed before. After the initial shock and horror, a new emotion came over him, panic, fear. He was in deep deep trouble now, he wondered what his boss would say, wondered what he should do next.
Slowly and grudgingly he took out his phone.

13 comments:

  busy-writer

November 16, 2007 at 7:55 PM

:O whoa. whoa!!!!
raunaq k.v, fab!!!

like seriously, fab!

this is gettin very very interestin now, sheesh.. m dyin to read part3 now!!

omg, get tht posted soon!

loove the suspense here.

  Prehistoric Developments!

November 16, 2007 at 8:35 PM

wow!!!
it's that good??? :-O
yay me!!!
thanks, and patience, tell you what, you write your next segment of snapshots, and i'll continue!

  ♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪

November 17, 2007 at 12:18 AM

god ur soooo damn amazing... n wat shit did u tell me saying u cunt write stories??? im dying 2 read da rest..... simply amazing... woah!!!
n i sure was surprised u posted the nxt part soo soon...
lol.. monica actuly still hasnt finished a story she started months ago...lol... cia

  busy-writer

November 17, 2007 at 12:36 AM

@ron
lol, oh yea? wait for my next next post then :D

i'll tell u wht happens to my neil n jessica.(i sincerely hope i got their names rite.its been quite a while u knw) :-p

@harini
sigh did u hvta rub it in?

  Prehistoric Developments!

November 17, 2007 at 10:55 AM

@harinini
thank you and thank you again!!
well, i don't know how much u'll like the next part, because it's going to be completely different from what u're expecting, i'm sure of it

@busywriter
i'm looking forward to it!

  Prehistoric Developments!

November 17, 2007 at 8:28 PM

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  busy-writer

November 18, 2007 at 12:25 AM

@prehistoric developments
oye, for more readers, u need to tell your blogsworld of your existance :P visit ppl'z blogs and read and comment :)

  ♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪

November 18, 2007 at 5:03 PM

@monica--- i just hafta pick on ya sumtime na??? i just cant always b mis-goody-goody-the-geek

@the prehistoric guy...
nice deal wid monica....waaaaaaaaahh i wanna do a story too.... but 4 all u no itll b like prncss diaries....
n for historys sake... chk mine n monicas blogroll n visit other ppls bloogs, comment oon ders n ask em 2 visit urs........
starting bloggin is not easy....well blah.. but i started dat way... so good luck

  busy-writer

November 21, 2007 at 8:57 PM

why was the man 6 miles away 'bruised' btw?

  ♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪

November 22, 2007 at 8:50 PM

@the history guy.... wats ur proob?? ur skool also doesnt bug ya... ur free n jobless all d time.... just write sumthing na???

  Mystique

November 23, 2007 at 2:16 PM

hmm....im confused and intrigued.....
uhh i can't do stories for nuts, i stick with sarky rants about life.....

  Prehistoric Developments!

November 23, 2007 at 6:46 PM

@busy writer
patience!!

@harini
i have other work Harini

@mystique
haha!!
well, they make good stories too!!

  ♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪

November 26, 2007 at 11:20 PM

ur soooooooo damn downrite absolutely mean!!!!!!!!(well i ran outa vocabulary)......... but u comment on other ppls blogs 2 make dem read urs but cant u comment on mine?????????
**sob**

n even monica hasnt commmented on my latest post